Assignment #1 Draft Comments

My piece is on the factors of race and popular public opinion and how they affected the proceedings in the cases of The State of Florida v. George Zimmerman and The State of California v. Orenthal James Simpson. I decided to cut down on a lot of the influences to focus on the ones that are significant and can best represent my analysis. I have a ton of background information that I’m still pumping into my piece, so my meaningful analysis has not fully developed yet. I may have to condense what I have so far considering I’ve written four or more pages and haven’t fully expressed my opinion yet.