Category Archives: English Rhetoric

Reflective Essay

When the STP session began I thought of myself as a satisfactory writer, but with no aspirations to sit for long periods of time only to write about an assigned prompt. Ideas do not come to me well when I am staring at a paper knowingly I have to fill up six pages of size twelve font words. In high school, I would put sentences down that was very broad and unnecessary just to take up space. With small classes and brilliant professors, there is no way that will work at Virginia Military Institute.

Over the course of this session, LTC Ticen has helped me with so much, I have learned to appreciate more pieces of work and to think positively when assigned to write a paper. With her comments, conferences, and multiple peer’s response sessions I have able to overcome the obstacle of figuring out how to expand off my ideas and correct an unbelievable amount of grammar errors.

There is always something I can improve on in every aspect of my life. With writing, it is developing and proving how my evidence is relevant to the topic of discussion. Understanding the topic is one thing, but then applying it to vital evidence and proving how it works with one another is another thing. The short and simple answer is always the route I try to take. This does not work when writing college papers. I am improving on this writing requisite, but still have the most trouble with it as well.

As I prepare to take ERH102 I advise myself to go to the writing center more because all of the staff were very helpful on giving positive feedback from a new set of eyes. Reading papers out loud and explaining the prompt to someone who has a fresh pair of eyes and ears can help exponentially. I will never forget reading “Shitty First Drafts” on the first day of class. Anne Lamott, a successful author, explained how writing a first draft that is terrible is allowed. I will continue to remind myself of this with every paper I write in the future.

Discourse Communities

The discourse community of the biology department at Virginia Military Institue was by far the most difficult essay I have ever written. In the beginning, I did not even understand what a discourse community was and the importance of Swales viewpoints on it. It was not until I hit a wall of frustration in the process of rough drafting that I went up to Alex Galin and asked for help. He explained the definition of a discourse community in an easier way and broke down Swales viewpoints very well. In all, I came up the definition of a discourse community is a group of people, consisting of novices and experts, working towards a common goal that communicates in mass amounts of ways to achieve that goal.

Malcolm X

We had the option to choose between a handful of authors for the assignment to write a rhetorical analysis about and I choose Malcolm X instantly. His life story fighting through of fighting through countless struggles is inspiring. He taught himself how to read in prison with a dictionary because he wanted to better himself and be illiterate.

Writing a rhetorical analysis the correct way can be confusing. I had the most difficult time with not writing about Malcolm X’s life more than writing about the rhetorical devices within his autobiography of his life story. With help from my classmates and teacher, I learned about rhetorical analysis and strategies to work through it.

Myself as an Evolving Writer

The first essay in ERH 101 was about my writing experiences and how I see writing impacting our society in the future. From my all time high in third grade to a low in fifth, I embedded it in this essay impacting how I viewed writing the rest of my grade school education. I explain how societies future is dependent on writing allowing us to communicate in countless ways.

While writing this essay I was stressing out trying to make my first college paper perfect. Initially, I went about brainstorming as I did in high school and quickly realized I needed to do a lot more work. Collaborating with Travis Tarring and asking LTC Ticen questions really helped me through writing this paper.