On this page, I will explain on why I chose this essay to revise.

Revision tag on genre “ Country music”:

The essay I seemed to have the most trouble with was the genre essay. This essay was chosen because I like country music and it would be easy but I thought wrong.  The reason I chose to revise this one was due to the fact that personally it did not flow as well as my other essays. I felt in my essay I had a good topic that was easy to work with, but it posed to be difficult in some areas such as transitions in between body paragraphs. I felt after reading it I jumped right into the next topic instead of combing the two aspects to a general related topic that would suit the two paragraphs. I know for a fact if I adjusted that situation in all my paragraphs, I will have a better flow and organizational look and read to the paper. What I can strengthen is the words and terminology that were used making it more specific in some areas. For instance when I am talking about the lyrics of the songs and what they mean. I needed to relate them back to the essay to show the reader that there is specific meaning behind what is going on with the lyrics connecting to the reader or listener. Also I would make sure to read this essay aloud multiple times to decrease the grammatical errors. This will allow my paper to flow nicely and have few grammatical issues. Therefore this would make the essay stronger.