December
9
“English” essay
this essay take a look back at my life in 10th grade. even though I had enough time, I did little editing I have a bad intro in the beginning with little detail and a poorly worded thesis. I like how I use a good transiting paragraph to inter in the body of my essay showing how I end up in that class. the first paragraph was a good paragraph by not only showing an example but showing what I did, how I wrote it and how I felt about it. the last two paragraph where also short
essay
https://sites.vmi.edu/richardsiine19/?p=18
revised