The main thing that I have to work on that both of the papers did a better job at than I did is making a proper thesis. I kind of went off track with mine so I need to figure out how to change mine to make it better. The sample papers also do a better job at writing an analysis paper while I still need to work on my body paragraphs a little bit. Making sure I stop at the summary paragraph and not make the whole paper an analysis. I also need to explain more and go into depth with my analysis body paragraphs. I also need to make sure I do my work cited page correctly so I don’t get more points deducted.