This essay is about older country music and how its style is different from modern day country. And how newer country has changed its style from the old country style. It talks about how older country music is better than newer country. I worked on integrating direct quotes into my work to show examples of what I was describing. I feel as developed my skills of fixing some of my use of commas. I still need to work on not repeating myself as much and expanding better on topics. This essay especially since I didn’t spend as much time as I needed to. I also need to work on my format of my bibliography page. For example on bibliography page the citations aren’t properly indented or in alphabetical order.