In my writing, I believe that I need to improve my introductions. This essay was the first time I wrote a two paragraph introduction and I struggled with it a lot. The main points where I struggled was in where to create a break or a transition in between my paragraphs. I felt as if I needed to give a lot of information but struggled with making that information be effective and make sense within my introduction.
As a writer I feel that I have developed by being able to use a broader range of resources as evidence in my writing. In this essay rather than using only professional resources such as texts, syllabi, or articles, I was using social media, and forums. I learned how to use for casual or real world evidence.
