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Paper 4 introduction: paper-4

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I try and write on a high level but sometimes get  in trouble when thinking of the right words to use.

In paragraph 1, Osborne uses a very interesting hook that drew me into wanting to read more. This was continued for the next several paragraphs, each as intriguing as the last, while he sets up the anecdotal story. The several paragraphs following the introduction transition the essay to a time before his revelation happened building further suspense for me. After this he moves into more of a self evaluation as to what went wrong to begin with and why his writing is “different”. He summarizes that trait and blames it on his mother. After this, and some “rambling”, he begins showing the reader how this revelation changed the way he writes, and uses his friends option at the end to further this.