This is an essay I wrote at the end of ERH 101 during the first semester of my freshman year. The purpose of this assignment was to re evaluate our writings from the semester and determine what needed the most improvement. Once we were able to determine our problems we needed to present a solution. There are various quotes from my other papers throughout this essay which give concrete evidence to support my improvement claims. This is an example of writing early in my cadetship. It demonstrates my ability to reflect on my learning as well as my ability to think analytically.