By examining Stanford’s engineering website, using Swales writings on discourse communities as a a guideline, I will determine how well the website fits into the mechanical engineering community as well as the role it plays and what it’s objectives are.
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watch out for personal pronouns. I would ask major Garriot if you can right in first person.
What is its purpose? mention the purpose of the writing. Its a little confusing at the end and kinda drops the argument. Overall pretty good.
Personal pronouns are fine.