As the final assignment in ERH 101, our class was asked to revise one of the three essays that we have written.  I chose the first essay because I felt that it needed the most work.  I did not start from scratch, but rather, took what I already had and made changes that I felt were necessary.  I did, however, cut a short section out.  Mostly, I reorganized and rewrote what I had.  The last thing that I did was correct my works cited page.