When compared to paper A my paper has a little more summary throughout either explaining terms or parts of Swales. I realize, when compared, my paper lacks very specific topic and it slightly broader than the paper A thesis/topic. Compared to paper B I need to use a specific thesis and in the body paragraphs I need to keep them directly related to the thesis and the discourse community in that specific manor. I also need, when using quotes, to better explain why I am using the quote to better analyze the source.
