Evaluation, explanation, and advice
The student’s paraphrasing is too closely similar to the original article’s texts, and the student didn’t cite his/her information. I remember being taught that if you decide to add any new information in your own work that you didn’t know yourself (and had gotten from a different source), then you must cite that information (with in text citations and/or quotes). Furthermore, it would be much better if you explained how Sanders is actually not as far off in votes from Clinton as Clinton claims.
(Kessler).
Help Received: Garriet, EC Writing Book
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